I have been reading Elizabeth Bishop and playing with rhyming stanzas, but I think there is something missing here. I will have to look up a sestina again!
Love Song
I know you love me really
You just fight it
I should have made the tea
The way you like it
I didn’t make the bed
And you were grumpy
The pillows were not plumped
Which made them lumpy
If there’s a tear upon my face
Of course you’d swipe it
I should have made the tea
The way you like it
And when you couldn’t sleep
It made you tired
You need your seven hours
It’s how you’re wired
It’s like you’re a touch paper
And I light it
I should have made the tea
The way you like it
So when you made the fist
I should have gone along
I’ve learnt to take the punches
In this love song
I know that you feel better
When you fight me
How could you ever love
If you don’t like me?
I enjoyed this poem a lot, Becky. What a powerful finish!
Thank you.